Souls in Sin
I find no sanity
In this world of Devil’s grace;
This is the horrid time when
Dark’s the name of Lord.
‘Feel the heat from Hell below
In every step I take
There is no heaven lake
Where lava melts down dreams
Meditate they say
Gain the peace of soul
How do I explain to you
Where IS my burning soul?!
I sold my sold my soul to Satan
Gave in to dark Desire;
Broke into tears of blood
Punctured my empty heart.
Meditate they say
Attain the peace of soul
Wish I could show you
Where IS my burning soul!
Deep in Hell
Suffering in Hell
Deep in Hell
Suffocating in Sin.
6 comments:
You are raging in red, alright! But my eyes couldn't take the contrasting colors and I couldn't make out the gray stuff on the right.. I think you have to try out more colors which suits reading.
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hey!!! this red is seriously killing!!! i wud suggest u to change the colour. the poem the u hav written is good. i see the same theme in almost all of ur writings.. the pain.. the suffering.
feedback taken:) back to square one...
Ya. i agree with sushma, ur poems contain a lot of pain in it (mine also has)... Try to pen down stuffs the way u behave in coll. funny,enjoyable,and nutty. Dont pain urself all the time.
and add me to ur blogroll or links wen u find time. (adding in blogger is pain. i know)
Ouch...... that's really dark and deep. Lighten up. What's it that's eating you up?
ha ha...it must've been a while since u read what i write..its just the way i write...
nothing whatsoever to do with me or my life!:)nothin's eatin me up..its usually the other way around with me eatin ppl's heads off!:P
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